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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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sometimes as I write, the screen asks me more questions than I can answer alone. hands on keys reply what you see here. (wide empty spaces are nothing to fear) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
empty page won't frighten me-- and empty space? More room to spin... The only thing that brings chagrin is emptiness that dwells within... Hands to keys, you asked for it! Now congratulate me on the new PC-- so pleased am I, serenity... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hands on keys show kindness please I fear ignorance of bliss does curse these keys I type my think I smile Your ink mortifies my reasoning Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hands on keys... Tis not wide empty spaces that i fear... tis the voices in my head that i hear. *smile* hey...even I get this one...  say goodnite poet squirrel, sweet dreams. *S* jm/bs ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Uh oh, what did I start? (and what died in 3 messages flat?  )Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you... not everyone can be this cool (smile) whats up poet squirrel? hands on keys... no shame is found in 3 flat... not all knows this is-- where its at. but you know its your destiny... you'll always get a read from sweet serenity ... and ME arent you sorry you asked LOL jm/bs |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
your poem simply made me think about the replies I make to posts and how I feel when I misread one and blunder a reply ... I now fear to reply to many posts because of the complaints I've read about people not understanding a poem ... and misreading others feelings |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You get those questions from your screen, too? I usually ask mine just as many as it asks me...what gives? Alone is sometimes the only way I can find the answers though. Liked this little bit of insight into you. ~ Claire |
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