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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am Keeper of The Secrets. I am Singer of The Song. Ponder stars & love's begin, as Elders chant my name within. Desirous, hunger, still unknown, I keep the secrets, sing the songs. I am Goddess, b'neath the moon, sway to feel the rhythmic tune-- reaching down to touch the dew, I worry that the stars cry too. Shedding tears for unknown long... I am keeper of the secrets. I am singer of the song. I am aware that danger lurks. And yes, 'tis true that fire burns. Remembering days of laughter free, prod ember of the dying me-- I pray to find serenity. Keeper of no secrets sworn singing song forevermore. (Michael made me do it.) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Well, thank you Michael for having serenity write this poem for us!! This was indeed wonderful... you have done well with the challenge.. . ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Shame on you Michael for making serenity bare her soul. Lovely Serenity, Nice to meet you. netswan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is perfect sis...I can feel you in every line!! Heck- if I knew it would be this good, I'd have made you do it!!!  Love you ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Serenity...wow....you really captured the essence of Nature with this one. A very very fine answer to the challenge. Alicat |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am Goddess, b'neath the moon, sway to feel the rhythmic tune-- reaching down to touch the dew, I worry that the stars cry too. Shedding tears for unknown long... I am keeper of the secrets. I am singer of the song. ---------------- remind me to send M, a thank you note... "I am" smiling now... you are the goddess of serene... this is perfect sweets!! (dont cha leave me no more) ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Beautiful words, Keeper of the Secrets.  I hear your Song, loud and clear. Excellent poem. Blessed be.Bobbycat =^..^= |
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TearsFromHeaven Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 19Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
serenity, I have to thank Michael for making you do it. It is wonderful. I like the images you brought to me, strong and powerful, yet compassionate. Very good! Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man. Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven. M'luv,as always, thank you, your kindness means much to me. n'swan. Have we not met? If not, a fine how d'ya do to you...and thanx. devina. Words beyond hugs...love you much. check your mail tomorrow...LTY... Alicat. Beware. I am growing fond of you. This was much fun. thanx to you as well as Michael... you guys tag-teamed me, methinks... J-Marie. Leave you? NEVER...How could I stand meself? More later...and put some salve on those lips, 'k? T-F-H. I am also a Wiper of Tears...(Don't make me come over there...) Thank you for your sweet reply. bobbycat. A Merry Meet to you! and a Goddess wink back atchya! Thank you, friend. And thanks to all...Merry May & Blessed Beltane to you all...Now go and enjoy the day! I close now, as I have dreams to dream. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You are truly one of a kind, serenity and you've done wonderful with this one. I'm glad I made you do it. Michael |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
This is beautiful, and I can only echo the comments above. you used the inspiration well to show us your heart and soul. "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, you are |
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