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You Walk , I'll Run
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You Walk , I'll Run |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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You Walk , I’ll Run How do you not know me? I am who stands in front of you Your eyes see with no depth I see clearly of you Our vows were to be in union You walk alone I am the one you pledged your soul safe keeping You were to treasure the heart that beat’s for you endlessly Melodiously was our tune to be but soured you have made its note What is your aim? Mine was to reach lover’s tabernacle You appear to be seeking flight I ask why? You continuously deny your position I am left in wait Your love I declare false You can’t fight the truth You want to walk Well I want to run By, Cerenity |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Cerenity this had quite a surprise ending ----sad thing to write about, but how well you did it!  Thanks for sharing netswan |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Cerenity-1, You are the first poem for me to venture out of dark passions, I was hoping to see the world with some light. I have waited like this, your poem is very heartfelt and to the bone. If this is from experience my heart to you, It this is from thoughts my heart to you again for that. And do run. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Netswan, Thank you so much for your reply. Hi Joel the wolf, This carry's light for I can see clearly what is in front of me, to experience it I don't recommend, but I will take flight at just the right moment in time, for now there must be a lesson in all of this somewere. Thank you for your kind words. Cerenity |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Hi Cerenity! I hope you take flight before your wings get clipped! This is a lovely poem...very sad. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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TearsFromHeaven Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 19Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Cerenity, Wow! I can empathize with you. I know how it feels to be in this position. You guys are all so incredible. My friend TerryW told me that you were good, and I believe every word he said. I love it! Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man. Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lizzie, Thanks for your words of encouragement. Hi TearsFromHeaven, Thank you so much for your kind reply, yes passions is full of wonderful poets with very big hearts to match there talents, You will enjoy it here. WELCOME Love, Cerenity |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Bitter sweet sadness here....It's sad when you realize that you want different things, and I think you expressed it perfectly with you walk, I'll run "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Cerenity, I was married for ten years and my husband always threatened to 'walk'. I told him that when I was ready I would 'run' and that's what I did ten years ago. Good luck to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
powerful write |
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