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The Messengers of God
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The Messengers of God |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The Messengers of God Through silence of dark and murk In ties that bind mortal with the immortal In the gift of love, is the Dove's work Co-excisting on Earth's Plain that we must share There names and spirit faces, I know not Only delighting in the spell of radiant beauty Many generations, of this great creation have repetitively sought To seek out these invisible helpers from the City of David In brightly lit hues, of hearts fire red They descend from winter white tunnel Created from ashes and dust, we are awakened from our bed In a sea of blues and greens, the Arch Angels have come These heavenly hosts, the Sons of God Hold the melody of our prayers Entrust in thee and you will see That these are the messengers The messengers of God Marina Feb 4/2000 |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Why, hello, Marina. Long time no see. I like this one. Great message in it. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
No doubt.. . I'm with Jeffery. . . This a great one Marina. . .they are indeed all around us. . . who knows? You may be talking to one right now. .. ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In brightly lit hues, of hearts fire red They descend from winter white tunnel Created from ashes and dust, we are awakened from our bed In a sea of blues and greens, the Arch Angels have come ---------------------- love the imagery in this... and the message. very well written and thought thru work most impressive marina-girl *smile* that stanza above is perfection!! ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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TearsFromHeaven Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 19Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marina, Very good! I like the tone and the mood of this one. Gives us a light of hope. I loved reading your poem. Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man. Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Marina and very well done! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is the very first poem I had ever written. I only posted it to show a friend who had never seen it. I would like to say my skills as a so called "poet" have improved since, however I believe my progress may be a little slow. I can say however....that I certainly do enjoy writing poetry and I am always grateful for the support and compliments you all have always shown me. Thank you to everyone for your posts. Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-01-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Being your first poem its charmed, and it was a excellent start. I think it sorta set your style very well. Nice to read it again. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed the imagery and the spirit of this poem...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James...charmed? I believe that is word associated with witchcraft isn't it??? But I do thank you for your compliment. James, thank you as always. I always look forward to your post. Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jeffery e-mail me when you get a topic. Marina |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Messengers of God -we entertain Angels unaware, very good and descriptive poem. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Rosebud, thank you. I do believe angels are everywhere. Marina |
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