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[BABE] Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 11 |
I sit there watching every movement you make, Every word you say, every step you take. And when I expect, you are not there But I have to act as if I don't care. These feelings inside. How long will they last? Will they become a thing of the past? But right now there are there, as strong as can be. I know you can't tell, but it's obvious to me. Is there a chance we will get together? Or will we just be friends forever? I know I shouldn't, but I do. I can't help it, I'm in love with you ! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
[BABE] Simple, sincere, nicely worded, lovely ... Summing it up, a fascinating piece! Really liked it. Regards, Sudhir< !signature--> In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Babe, I like this one alot. The expression of emotion and feelings is so vividly clear! Cocobaci |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Babe this is as lovely as they come. James |
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