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Open Poetry #7

Love......

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

0 posted 2000-04-30 09:23 PM

You know I love you,
and i will forever
I just don't think we'll be together
Everyone knows theres a time to go
and when theres a time to just let go.
You tell me i'm your dream come true
and that your love for me is unexplainable.
No matter whatever happens to you or me
I will always keep you in my dreams.
As I remember all the times we spent on the phone
or times we spent all alone,
times we spent on the beach and times when we giggled and laughed about everything.
Even the times we got in a fight, but forgave eachother and just forgot.
It's time for me to go now,
remember me sometimes,
You will always and forever be with me as I remember our happy memories....

this is the very first one i ever did... I'm 13 and it was just kind of a thought.. So i worte it down and it came to this.... Thank you all Love you.

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-30 09:30 PM

Hi Cutie -- Good for you to write, as
it spiels out -- that is a great way
to create a poem.

Boy, am I glad I am not the one that
gets this one --------what a heart breaker
for someone.

Well done. Keep writing

netswan

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

2 posted 2000-04-30 09:36 PM

If I haven't welcomed you to passions already let me do it now.
Welcome to passions.

I have found in my experience that when the poems "write themselves" is when we tend to see more of our true feelings and hearts emotions. You have done very well with this piece.

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-10-04 05:10 AM

Like the line..."remember me sometime"...many times I remember my past loves...James

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