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Love In Paris |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Oh my heart is stirred, Memeories of that night occured, From loves pandora box, To fly beyond the clouds, Hands entwined together, Hearts now beating faster, As we venture to unknown land, This night I will forever remember, On our destiny of sweet surrender, A Paris night full of Romance, Fragrant smells in a slumbers trance, Dinner for two at the sidewalk cafe, I speak french for you as we par-la-voufransa Glittering stars, diamonds in your eyes, Mystic, magic, Inquisitive to your hearts disquise, This moment, this time,forever is mine, To love, to be free, To escape reality, Into the night we explore, new beginnings New lives, In search for more, A toast, a glance, Me smiling at you in dizzy romance, My glow, I glisten, For your heart does listen, Upon every word that is heard, This date, this fate, Moment I am changed forever, This night in Paris, A dream My heart forever treasures! I will forever Remember, Us together....Nothing between us, But a "Love In Paris!" [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Romantic Heart! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Miss Devine!!! I am honored by your time to read one of mine!! Thank you sweet Denise, for your sweet reply, Who has made my day complete with a smile!! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Simply devine.....I remember Paris, and you describe the feeling of love in Paris exquisitely. Beautiful writing dear. All my love, Jeffrey |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh such romance and delight I find in this  very beautiful Romantic Heart.Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
Hm....are you talking about your HONEYMOON, A romantic Heart? *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jeffery...Thanks for the sweet compliment, Must have been your honeymoon? Tracie...Thank you...glad you enjoyed! Goofyduck: To answer your question, nope, not my honeymoon! Just a daydream!! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
This would be a beautiful way to spend that special time...still, if only in dreams. Wonderful job, RH....makes me yearn to be on that trans-Atlantic flight with ya. *grin* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Actually it was our second honeymoon. The first was in Hawaii. All my love, Jeffrey |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ali....You know that kittys have to ride in their little Pet travel box, because they don't like flying too well!!! LOL!!! Thanks for your sweet reply Jeffery...wow! second, How many people even get a first, a second one also...wow!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tres magnifique madame!! Paris has always been my favorite city in the entire world. . . and you have captured it here very well. . . *sigh* -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you sven, wow didn't know you speak french!!!! By the way what does that mean? Thanks for your nice reply!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Well, I really don't speak a lot of French, but I do know enough to say that. . . And it means that your poem is magnificent!! ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, I've always wanted to visit Paris, but now I want to go there even more! Great job."We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Nativetexan2 Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 13 |
RH, a perfect night in Paris. Vous avez décrit une nuit parfaite à Paris ce I tellement longtemps pour partager avec mon amour. Rich |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
OH PARIS!!! A marvelous city of lights, and you picturise the romantic mood so well!!! Great stuff! I had been to Paris once and the city moved me so much that I had to come up with a poem myself. I did that and put it here yesterday for everyone to view. Thanks for sharing your fond memories. Regards, sudhir Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Nothing between us but a love in Paris." How enticing...I have been in Paris three times...my dream to go again..and again..and again...perhaps I should move there...that would be fun...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love this one...where are you Romantic Heart...James |
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