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An Ocean Of Emotion
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An Ocean Of Emotion |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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An Ocean Of Emotion ~*Marge Tindal*~ The shattered heart made a distant crying Large tears tumbled over others sighing Giving release to hearts forevermore That crying never did to hearts before The stars hung low and boding in the night Like bulbs grown dim in the shame of eyes might You could never tell that tears cascading In an ocean of emotion would be wading The tear in falling touched a heartfelt sigh It looked as if a tear of sad goodbye Was prepared to fall amid teary emotion Someone had lost all tender devotion There would be more than just a teardrops demise Before the last teardrop fell from lovers eyes ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Marge, Seems like you also know the value of tears. I especially liked the line "Large tears tumbled over others sighing". Sue |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
good one Marge....still going strong |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Di0bear~ Yep .. don't we all? I just know you're going to enjoy our forums. It's a nice place to be. RobertB~ Yes, not sure how 'strong' .. but still 'going'. Seriously, you don't come here often enough. I enjoy reading you. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've captured heartbreak well in this, Marge. Very well done! Denise |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
this poem was so sweet loved it!!!! |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
This poem is cool, very E.A. Poe-ish! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for that. It was my intention and to know I did it well, pleases me. Cutie~ Thank you, hon. Tuck~ My goodness, thank you very much.  I think you just made my night ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, Marge, such an open heart. The words. and the image so real. it was exquisitely poetic. Kathleen [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW..Margie-girl... this is so well written... its perfect..one of my favs of yours and in my humble opinion.. one of your best!!! so much emotion. excellent. ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this poem touched me very deeply. I especally liked the line "There would be more than just a teardrops demise Before the last teardrop fell from lovers eyes" Great job "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Thank you ... it caught me by surprise and just fell to the page. I'm so pleased you liked it. JanetMarie~ Thank you so much. I think I'm gonna like it a whole lot too. I appreciate your comments. LoveBug~ I am always pleased to hear what you think of what I've written ... thank you. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oh my...I'm feeling a bit of deja vu here hun...you know how to paint the picture!! *sniff sniff* I know it's just as hurtful on both sides, even though it may not seem that way...this was beautiful Marge...I won't give you anymore prissy comments, K? lol Love you ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Thank you, sweetie. I knew that you would 'feel' this one. And you can do that 'prissy' thing with me anytime ... actually, it describes me to a tee. (probably the word most used by my friends and family to describe me) LOL ! Love ya' *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tears are a part of life, and sometimes a wonderful release...I really liked this poem of yours, sweet Marge. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ocean of Emotion--Tidal wave of tears...loved this 'mom'... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...liked the title too..sometimes there is nothing left except the crying...remember the song raindrops keep falling from my head. It was a beautiful song about crying. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Yeah, hon ... a wonderful release, indeed. *HUGS*, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well ... pretty obvious I haven't had my second cup of coffee !!!! Just got in a hurry ..... Serenity~ Thanks, hon. I appreciate the comments. James~ You're a sweetie. Yes, that is a lovely song. Thank you for your replies, always. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge my sweet friend, yes when the heart is broken the tears do tumble. Sad poem Marge but still lovley Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
The image of a shattered heart crying was wonderful. What a great starting line.What emtoion and sadness. As always I enjoyed reading your poem "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I never knew heartbreak could be so beautiful!! I guess you can make anything seem beautiful though, right Marge? Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks, hon. So pleased you enjoyed. Tess~ Oh, thank you so much. ESP~ Hon, yes, there is much sadness in heartbreak .. but there is beauty in all emotions. Maybe that's what came through to you. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is wonderful Marge ... you've eloquently captured the life of a teardrop before it hits the cold hard floor. Beautiful! This "is" addictive ... /Kit McCallum |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Taking a stroll through the days-gone-by ... found your reply to this .... thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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