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Open Poetry #7

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SilverTongue
New Member

since 2000-04-18

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-04-18 02:37 AM

Here's a spur of the moment poem, just made it up

I have a slight
speech disabilty,
I can't keep everything
how it's 'sposed to be.

I often mix up words,
a simple fools mistake,
And I get made fun of,
Well if take that dont the cake.

I don't try to do it,
It sorta just comes out,
I'd sit and cry but they say
its less smile to work than pout.

So aparrently I
was not equipped
with perfect speech
So I'll just lip my zips

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

1 posted 2000-04-18 09:24 AM

Hi Silver Tongue,

You have me all tongue tied right about know,
Loved the poem,
Welcome to passions

Cerenity

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

2 posted 2000-04-18 09:46 AM

liked it too

funny how your mind tries to read it "right" instead of the way it is written lol

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

3 posted 2000-04-18 09:55 AM

Darling Poem, SilverTongue - makes a person think about the cruelty of others.
Cute ending. I was expecting it to happen
---) Just wasn't sure when it was a coming.

netswan

killer222
Junior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 48
Northolt,Middlesex,England

4 posted 2000-04-18 10:08 AM

Like it, I where know coming ya from

"shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

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