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Battle Field 2: The Sequel |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
The struggle is imminent We are ready for the worst The line between Life and Death, At this moment Was reduced to A matter of seconds The fate of many soldiers Is written , like the toss of a coin Our hearts , are filled Courage , Fear , Sorrow All feelings mixed up In every soldier's mind And me , the leader I'm waiting for the sign Waiting for the first arrow to be shot But the moment will come When my orders will be useless For no one will be able To hear me shouting Among the screams of A thousand suffering souls... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneRanger~ All too true, I fear. 'But the moment will come When my orders will be useless For no one will be able To hear me shouting Among the screams of A thousand suffering souls...' Touching and chilling. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Arrrrggghhhh!!! Part 3! I need part three!!!  I like how you are building the tension here but if you make me pull out any more of my hair there won't be any left to pull ... *Jim desperately tries to turn the page to get a glimpse of what happens next*.Out of my lair for the second time in a blue moon, The JimBouderwocky |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Thank you , Marge and Jbouder... And , a third part, well , it's always a good idea to make a continuous poem i like it... PS: At this rate , sooner or later I'm gonna right a book... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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