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Battle Field (Repost)

Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil

0 posted 2000-04-30 06:24 PM

Fixed eyes, silenced Voices
Bodies in rigid attention
Soldiers prepared to follow me in combat
Battle lines are traced by my hands
Positions taken
Defined Formations
Under my command, discipline veil
Is what separates us
From complete hysteria
Each one of us knows
That the order of our arrays
Shortly, will give place
To the desperate screams of mouths
Flowing blood
Swords and axes will cut men to the middle
But, at this time, we faced
An enemy still more insidious and cruel
The Silence

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"Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society

[This message has been edited by Lone Ranger (edited 04-30-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-04-30 07:15 PM

LoneRanger~
Very vividly told.
The silence before the battle is foreboding.
Very well told.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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