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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Soul Lovers Connection across space and time glimpsed through webbed words that bring sudden awareness that there was a time before when our soul’s met before distance could be breached by just a click for then dreams were where we opened and you said the sound of my voice brought you home and I said that I could see forever in the way you smiled and you were as familiar to me as my own breath and your essence was always in me waiting for a song to press a fragile moment into showing how silky we slide down rocks and into valleys that we have never seen except by listening with each other’s hearts. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely.... ...and you said the sound of my voice brought you home and I said that I could see forever in the way you smiled and you were as familiar to me as my own breath and your essence was always in me.... That really took my breath away! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
We learn more by listening with the heart don't we? This was excellent. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, this is lovely! I love reading poems that echo what is in my own heart. From the words " I said that I could see forever in the way you smiled" on, it could be the story of Dale and me. Mmm. Nice. Nice. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, I echo Rosemary in that so many times your writings reflect my own experiences and you put what's deep in my heart onto paper. I love this Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sure sound like love to me! Very lovely, Martie! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie, my sis~ This one hits close to the heart. You touch loving moments with sweet surrender and fold it into our hearts. 'you said the sound of my voice brought you home' You write so beautifully, Martie. Always a pleasure to read your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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