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Brandyn Sand
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0 posted 2000-04-30 11:45 AM


A smile changed the world,
For it was passed around,
Refreshing scores of thirsty hearts
Like rain on desert ground.

It was given to a mother,
Who gave it to her son;
He gave it to his teacher
Before the day was done.

It then restored the confidence
Of one who’d lost his wife;
He gave it to a discouraged cop
And helped him save a life.

It then inspired a poet,
Helped a soldier stop a war,
Brought hope of a brighter future
To the clerk in the corner store.

It helped a hardened felon see
Life was better than it seemed,
Encouraged a man to give his heart
To the woman of his dreams.

She gave it to a despairing wife
Who was bound to an abusive man;
She then discovered the courage
To finally take a stand.

It has given hope to many,
Brought joy to some feeling blue,
Helped others find a hidden strength,
It even saved a life or two.

So where did that smile originate,
The one opening all these doors?
You’ll find it in the mirror, my friend,
For that first smile was yours.


© Brandyn Sand
4-26-99




 

© Copyright 2000 Brandyn Sand - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-04-30 11:49 AM


Brandyn~
Man, oh man ... do I like this !
I'm such a believer in the power of a smile.
This is simply WONDERFUL ..
I hope it's contagious and everyone catches it ... and spreads it.
Thank you for this delight.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 2000-04-30 12:17 PM


Oh, I love this poem. It's amazing what kindness can do. And as for you and everyone reading, lots of smiles!

                        

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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3 posted 2000-04-30 12:30 PM


A smile has certainly changed this girl's world!!! Thank you for sharing this, it is a wonderful and delightful poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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4 posted 2000-04-30 12:44 PM


Well Brandyn, you got a smile out of me with this one - and that ain't been no easy task of late.  Well done.  


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5 posted 2000-04-30 12:47 PM


What a wonderful poem! I love it. There is power in a smile to be sure, it certainly brightens my day when I get one from an unexpected source! So I try to smile often.. thanks for sharing this with us...here's one for YOU  
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6 posted 2000-04-30 12:50 PM


What a wonderful, uplifting poem...
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7 posted 2000-04-30 01:06 PM


This poem made me S M I L E  . I loved it! You are a very good poet my friend, and write with much inspiration and beauty. thanks for sharing this...and from me to you heres your smile for the day  

take care,
amy

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Brandyn Sand
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8 posted 2000-04-30 04:25 PM


My, oh, my!  What encouraging comments!  You guys have absolutely made my day!!  I can't tell you how happy I am that I happened upon this forum replete with such gifted people. *whew!*

Thanx so much!!
Brandyn *wearing her most beaming smile* Sand

 

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9 posted 2000-04-30 08:52 PM


Brandyn, this is absolutely wonderful! We seldom think how important our little smiles are to others. We should all give more of them away. After all, they are free!

Denise

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10 posted 2000-04-30 09:13 PM


this was great i loved it so much!! it is right to a smile can cheer anyone up.. I mean it cheers me put, but you have to pass it along to make you happy!!! Good job loved it...!!!
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11 posted 2004-05-02 09:21 PM


this is good!
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