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Sweet Silence |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho 
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~ ~ ~ Sweet silence; perhaps the better choice; smooth quiet lull in echoed hall, of muted yearning voice. ~ ~ ~ Compassion; the tender way of mine; I sing to thee a melody - of love, line after line. ~ ~ ~ Sweet insight; that draws you near to me; wisdom to know the time to grow - our love was meant to be. ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Rosemary this is very very good. Thanks for sharing this. -- It was a lovely read. netswan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseMary~ Across the fir-lined studio ... your melody wafts to one who hears your song. 'wisdom to know the time to grow -' A lovely duet you two are ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Lovely, heartfelt, clear and concise. I enjoyed this, Rosemary. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosemary, A lovely poem. *L* |
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jkm1 Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 11 |
oh, i liked this a lot. your word choice was excellent and your imagery breathtaking. =) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful poem Rosemary. I couldn't single out a line or verse that I thought was a standout....because they all are!!! Thank you...  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
If the kids would just quit knocking or our door we could maybe visit this place together. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosemary, This is just wonderful, I really enjoyed. Thank you for sharing, Cerenity |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
netswan Marge Tindal doreen peri Seymour Tabin jkm1 Poet deVine ESP lucky Cerenity-1 You all just cleared the clouds away from a dismal day, and let that sun shine down on me again! Thank you all for seeing some value in this poem, which happens to be very meaningful to me. I appreciate every one of you, and thank you for taking the time to let me know your thoughts. I think you are all just great, and I enjoy your poetry as well. ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes perhaps |
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