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I AM ------For alicat's (angel) challenge
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I AM ------For alicat's (angel) challenge |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
I am woman and writer I wonder if I will stop accepting second best I hear impish devils whispering in my ear I see my dream mate in a vision I want to know about the end I am woman and writer I pretend that all is okay I feel clouds brushing my face I touch the wind as it caresses me I cry over things that might happen I am woman and writer I understand how people feel I say to them things to help their hurts I dream about things that come true I try to exercise every day I hope for my books to be published I am woman and writer netswan |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Seems that we, like many here, share the same dream of being published.  Thank you for answering the challenge...just a way to get to know everyone a bit better, and you did a marvelous job.  Alicat |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Teresa, You just keep writing the way you are and one day you will be published, I have no doubt about that. Keep your head up and reaching for your dreams. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
NS... this was no challenge for you I see (smile) perfect words here. I related much to this... loved the first two stanzas very nice work!! ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's nice to 'know' you....I think this is my favorite challenge so far... Gives us a chance to know more about the rest of our family..... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Seems we all have lots in commone when we get down to the simple truths... Well done, netswan. Michael |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi netswan, We have a lot in common, you are a wonderful soul to get to know thank you for sharing about who you are. Cerenity |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~netswan it's a true pleasure to "meet" you. you write with such clarity and depth. i loved the first stanza of this! but the whole piece was wonderful. thanks so much for meeting this challenge and sharing with us a part of yourself. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you have revealed very much of yourselves within these simple lines...i like the way you care for others, are appreciative of nature and your positive attitude towards life...thanx for sharing  |
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