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I Am- challenge |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
The rest were posting new threads so I thought why not?...lol I am an independant nurturer I wonder why people can be so blind I hear the trees whisper to the breeze I see the sky kiss the earth I want to see the world I am an independant nurturer I pretend to live in his arms I feel growth in the journey I touch the dreams of the world I worry I am not enough I cry for the loss of innocence I am an independant nurturer I understand that anything worth while is not easy I say love is the answer I dream of true freedom I try to live up to my potential I hope to see my words in print I am an independant nurturer [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Yep, I can see you love people and nature. Glad to have you as a friend.  Alicat [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Yes, Marilyn. I just posted mine too, and edited the one in Alicat's thread, and sent his thread back to the top so others can do this, too. YOURS is great -- I enjoyed all that nurturing --) netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
very well said jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nice to 'meet' you! It's wonderful to read these...it's a chance to get to know you better....  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I'll vouch - you definately are a nurturer. Very well done, Marilyn. Michael |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
A nurturer you most definitely are!! This is a lovely poem....we are lucky to have you in our numbers! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is very nicely done, Marilyn. It was an interesting challenge, wasn't it? Makes you do a little soul searching... Again, nice job! |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Outstanding! This challenge seems to be bringing out the best in everyone. *whew!* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A great response to the challenge... I enjoyed learning more about you! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Marilyn It was great reading this and getting to know you better. You are definitely a winner in my book. Not only are you a great poet, but sounds like a wonderful person in general and someone i am proud to call friend. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wow..I am not sure what to say in response to all of you. I am glad you enjoyed this little peek into me but I think some of you (those who already know me) already knew this much. This was definately a challenge to write and something that made me look deep inside myself. I know I could write many of these and still have a few extra things to say about the different aspects of me. We are all so complex but at the same time very simple. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marilyn, i believe that you have said it all...i like the way you bare your complex self in such simple, short and sweet words....  |
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