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Nicole
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0 posted 2000-04-29 11:10 PM


He is silence
He is wonder
He is my waking midnight dream
Security and safety
His whisper transcends the loudest screams

A softly spoken word
whispered ‘tween two
A slightly haunting chord
from a song always new

He is Darkness
He is light
He is my patchwork heart’s seam
Honesty, Integrity
Likened to an elusive moonlight beam

A lightly brushed kiss
upon sweetheart’s brow
The pleasure given in
it withheld until just now

He is forever
He is feeling
He is my emotions running over
Loving ingenuity
He is the familiar touch of a lover



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Williams - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2000-04-29 11:19 PM


Darkness got a hold of you eh, Nicole?  Never fear Sweetness, you are definately the light that will hold him.  Beautiful sentiment for a lucky man, me thinks.  


Michael

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2 posted 2000-04-29 11:30 PM


Deeply moving, Satiate.  You just keep getting better.  


Alicat

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3 posted 2000-04-30 01:38 AM


Satiate,
        this is wonderful. . .a true tribute to the love in your life. . .

Wonderful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-04-30 03:20 AM


Lovely! This one just flows...  
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-04-30 08:47 AM


Satiate~
I really enjoyed the way this wandered.
Lovingly embracing a moment from your heart.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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6 posted 2004-05-02 09:26 PM


very sweet
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