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The Dream's In My Head (doreen's daughter, first post)
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The Dream's In My Head (doreen's daughter, first post) |
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AliciaRose New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 8 |
The Dream's in My Head As I dream My head is clean as a star. So why dream that's my question. I am dreaming, dreaming quietly! So dreaming is fun! That's the question. Having a dream about an alien is so bad! (c) Alicia Rose, age 7-1/2, 4/29/2000 all rights reserved |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! It's so nice to read your poem, it's well done... please check your email for a special message!  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well, well, Alicia Rose - what a darling poem. I hope that you don't have to dream about aliens anymore --) Dreams are the way we work out our problems. That is what dreams are for. You have me beat. I didn't write my first poem until I was 8 years old. If you would like to hear it, I will post it for you. bye bye netswan |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
LOL!!!  Welcome aboard AliciaRose. This poem is very funny, and insightful. I thank you for sharing it with us. Alicat |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Good poem, Alicia Rose! You must take after your mom! Keep writing! I thought my first poem up when I was five, about yellow jello, but did not start really writing poetry until I was eight. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to passions...are we related? I'm Irish Rose,  I liked this one...dreams are one of my favorite topics.!! Kathleen [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Alicia, Sweetie - This is totally AWESOME!!! You make me want to go to sleep and dream... I think I'll do that right now...   |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hi Alicia - how have you been sweetie? Do you remember me? This is wonderful. Why dream - well when you get just a little older dreaming will become more and more neccessary. For now - just dream for fun o.k. And hey - all aliens aren't bad... just he goofy looking green ones me thinks. Michael |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely first post, Alicia Rose!! Very insightful....now mind you have good dreams and not bad ones as much as possible! I look forward to your next post!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Alicia, Alicia, Alicia!!! This is wonderful!!! I'm so very proud of you! I can't wait for you to make a poetry book to keep all of your poems in! I love you very very much. Love, Mom |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
AliciaRose ... welcome to passions ... I like your poem ... try to have fun with your dreams ... just remember that you're dreaming and you'll be able to do anything ... just like a super hero My daughter posted a couple here ... she's 10 now ... she called herself 'minnie poet' I think I'll repost one for her ... look for one called 'Witch Poem ' ... she wrote a few and then lost interest ... i hope only temporarily Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Alicia This was very good! I love poems on dreams, I dream quite a lot myself. Why dream? Well I like to think of dreams as our biggest wishes and hopes in our head. And that someday they might all come true. Now I dont know much about aliens, but i suppose as long as they are being nice to you, they are ok lol You are too cute!AMY P.S. I am very impressed. I didnt write my first poem till i was 9. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliciaRose~ Just WONDERFUL ! I hope you have dreams about lots of good things. How 'bout lots of good dream wishes with lots of little fishes ?  Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Alicia, I love this poem, You are blessed with such talent, and I am blessed to enjoy your beautiful smile and sweetness whenever I need a dose. Thanks for sharing yourself here with us. You are such a blessing to all. |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
nice poem hun. good rhythm, flows easily, and hopefully those pesky aliens will leave you alone. personally though, most of you people have me beat. I wrote my first poem in the 10th grade, but since then I've worked hard at it. If you work hard at something, you will succeed and improve. Eventually you can be so good that you can make a living in what you do. Never give up on yourself hun. that is one key to success. another is to have faith that good things will happen. when you do those two things, little can stand in your way. good luck hun. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Alicia, this is great! I see the beginning of a wonderful career here. You're talented, you have a good imagination and a wonderful mother....you're a blessed little girl. Welcome!!! |
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