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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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0 posted 2000-04-29 07:14 AM


Come to me
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In the night, searching for peace,
As I try hard, as I try again,
In the night, looking for sleep,
As I seek much, as I seek again.

Oh! How I miss you my dear,
All that is left is fear,
To you whom I belonged so clear,
You remain so far yet so near.

I feel the bed, Alas! It is empty,
I fight my tears, I weep all the same,
Cold bed with lonely covers,
Shadows from a single street light.

The ghosts of the night,
Have triggered this fight,
What have I done to cause this plight,
Come to me dear, hold me tight.

Let me feel you and make you feel me,
Let me love you and make you love me,
Let me hold you in these open arms,
Let me kiss you with these lonely lips.

Yet I lay in the crumpled bed,
The cold linen and the dirty sheets,
It is for you, for whom I crave,
It is for you, for whom I live.

Come to me please, my darling,
Be my soul saving grace,
Come to me please, my dear
Save me from this wretched place.




 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski


© Copyright 2000 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-04-29 07:26 AM


----very sexy--except the part about the dirty sheets---talk to me after laundry day, love....winkie-eyes to ya....
Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-29 12:41 PM


The longing is quite evident in this! Very nice!

Denise

DeEpMeLaNcHoLy
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3 posted 2000-04-29 12:44 PM


That was a really nice poem. i think one of the best ones I've ever read. If only i could have talwent like that to write. Well done!
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-04-30 08:13 AM


Thank you all for the good words you are putting in for me.

I really am enjoying it here because of great people like you.

Sincerest regards,
sudhir.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-06-03 03:36 PM


There is much anguish in this, my friend... very sad, indeed...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
6 posted 2000-06-05 03:00 PM


Karilea my friend, thanks for reading.
Your words mean a lot. Thanks again.

Regards, sudhir.


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