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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
we could hear it ticking burning us away with every passing second no exceptions or delays in silence and rebellion and maybe something more you pluck it from my wrist let time fall to the floor for time is our only enemy in this hateful, anxious war enclosing, painfully rational a cage without a door time will set you free but keep me trapped inside a chain around the wrist of the hand that waves goodbye ...what do y'all think? -7 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I followed until the last verse---I think we allow ourselves as much freedom as we dare... and believe me, I am much more chickenscratch than you....enjoyed this much...(Me must loves to think too much, methinks....) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Some can be grateful for time and others hate the thought of time passing, much to think about here. I did like it  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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