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Honey To My Lips
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Honey To My Lips |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Thy words of sweetness, Are honey to thy lips, Taste so sweet to thy soul, For thy heart does hunger to hear them, They drip well from thy pen of poetry, dripping ever so softly into thy heart, Like dew drops slowly giving moisture to a rose, So is your lovely words bringing life to my spirit, Honey divine, like seasoned grapes from the vine, I am drunk on your wine, Your words intoxicate me, Like honey sticking to the comb, They cling to the depths of my mind, I long to hear them, Time after time, Put with beautiful words of poetry and rhyme, Like Honey to my lips, Your words please me, They excite, tease me, This Honey, Tis ever so sweet, For I cannot get enough to eat! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-28-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOAH...Now I know I am sending my resume...lol Man, oh, man.....this is smoking hot with desire. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Then mayhaps upon vernal time Thou wilst find such cloying rhyme And trap'd, both thine pens and hips Such passion endowed, with honeyed lips Alicat |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Jeffery, I just wrote it as I was posting...I guess that is what happens staying up so late...sometimes I get inspired***Smiles** Thanks you know where to send the resume...!hehe! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-28-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Ali...you amaze me, I am so touched, Your poetic reply overwhelmes me...**sigh** |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lots of great comparisons here and -----such a great ending to this one -- Romantic Heart. netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This was so good just YUMMY  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks netswan and tracie for your replies!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smooth as honey...James |
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