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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-04-28 02:48 AM



Far Beyond Tomorrow
~*Marge Tindal*~

Far beyond tomorrow's sun
beyond the span of time
You will be within my heart
You'll be forever mine

Far beyond the end of life
as we know it while we are here
Beyond the horizons of the spirit
I will hold your memories near

You will not go so far away
that I cannot follow you
When you least expect to see me
I'll be there with love imbued

I will hold you close to me
as I have held you longingly before
We will walk together again
far, far beyond tomorrow's door





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-28 03:03 AM


Marge,
Another masterful prformance. You just keep getting better m'lady.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Alicat
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2 posted 2000-04-28 03:05 AM


*smiles softly* Yawp, I can relate to this one...one of my fav expressions of love is: I will love you forever and a Wednesday, through rush-hour traffic in New York City.

And if that ain't forever, I don't know what is....  

Alicat

netswan
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3 posted 2000-04-28 04:14 AM


Beautiful Poem Marge. --

netswan

ESP
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4 posted 2000-04-28 04:26 AM


Marge, this is truly beautiful....I enjoyed it immensely!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2000-04-28 06:23 AM


this gives me so much hope, Marge,
it's lovely

 Kathleen


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6 posted 2000-04-28 07:47 AM


Jeffrey~
You are such a sweetie, I swear.
Thank you.

Alicat~
I love your expression.
Thank you for sharing it.
Yep, that's another 'forever'.

NetSwan~
Thank you so much.

ESP~
Smiles at knowing you enjoyed it.

Kathleen~
There is so much hope 'far beyond tomorrow'.
Glad you can grasp the hope.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2000-04-28 07:54 AM


Oh Marge~
This just is such a sweet, beautiful poem          I loved this so much. You are such a treasure Marge my friend, what would we do without you  
I was just about jumping out of my skin after reading this, I loved it so much.
Tracie~


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Anne Rooks


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8 posted 2000-04-28 08:36 PM


Tracie~
I am so glad that you loved it so much !
When this little muse gets inside my heart, she just doesn't know when to quit !

Thank you, Tracie~
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2000-04-28 08:48 PM


that was most beautiful.  you are truly an inspiration.  Sometimes things must be seen and felt with the heart.  Thanks for another wonderful piece.

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*



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10 posted 2000-04-28 09:28 PM


Aw, Marge, I'll love you forever
Or tomorrow - or Monday - whatever.
Throught happiness, sadness or sorrow
I will love you past tomorrow.
And I'll love the way your words rhyme
Through today, tomorrow, through all time
Till the fourth month past December
You're the one I will remember.

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11 posted 2000-04-28 09:32 PM


Now that's what love is suppossed to be! Beautiful, Marge!

Denise

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12 posted 2000-04-28 09:59 PM


Wonderful, Marge...Until the twelth of never...and that's a long long time...yes it is!
Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2000-04-28 10:44 PM


Marge,

I love this!!!  Sweet and wonderful.....as always!!!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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14 posted 2000-04-28 11:13 PM


~marge

as all of the rest of your work, this was simply beautiful!! you write with such poetic insight, grace, and depth! i love all your work and this was def one of my favs from you.

take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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15 posted 2000-04-28 11:21 PM


Marge, this is a beautiful poem. I still love those love poems... and this is one of my favorites!  Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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16 posted 2000-04-29 10:17 AM


Dawn~
I am most pleased to think that I inspire you.  Thank you.

Balladeer~
Kisses !
To be remembered in your heart
is more than enough for me.

Denise~
Yeah ... love is beautiful, isn't it?
Thanks, hon ... trying to reply to your
10,000 th post .... keep getting kicked out.
????????????????????????????????????????????
Bull-headed enough to keep trying !

Martie~
Now you picked one of the prettiest songs of all times - I'm pleased to think that this reminded you of that Johnny Mathis classic.

LoneWolf~
Thank you so much.

Amy~
Thank ya' hon.
Shucks, I just write down those little things that whisper to my heart.

LoveBug~
Yeah, nothing like a good love poem.
Gets ya' all mushy and stuff !
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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17 posted 2004-05-02 08:48 PM


very pretty
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