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Nothing really, just a poem. Just loose strands of words in odd flowing rows. Graffiti on a bathroom's wall is just as entertaining.
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Nothing really, just a poem. Just loose strands of words in odd flowing rows. Graffiti on a bathroom's wall is just as entertaining.
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Nothing really, just a poem. Just loose strands of words in odd flowing rows. Graffiti on a bathroom's wall is just as entertaining. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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Blank reality’s canvas < !signature-->perceiving painted dreams. Nighttime ambiguity in shadows it seems. Take that fantasy drink it on down till it breaks your soul and spins you around. Opened mouth eloquent fib fearful cheer mournful glib. Lizard kings sit upon a Roman thrown Imagination’s death if only we had known. There is something inside me and I know it's good, but understanding is misunderstood. [This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Effigy, I really liked this, it's excellent, loved it.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Ha ha, very funny title. Doesn't do justice to the poem. But, in their defence - I have read some pretty interesting bathroom walls!! I like this. Thanks for sharing. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Effigy~ this is pretty cool. The bathroom walls thing made me take a peek.  -SEA |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting reading here. I enjoyed it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Thanks I'm glad that you all enjoyed it. THis is just my little tribute to all the profesional bathroom poets out there, God bless them. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You too? How I wish I'd kept a journal of the writings I spied at U.N.O--college bathroom walls are simply the best...although there was a blues club called Benny's that was pretty interesting too...but that was Tulane territory... (See Above for example of true rambling...) Love your work. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
love that last stanza with all my heart i do and the rest is killer too |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
interesting, different ideas all somehow related. what prompted this? great piece to read. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina |
No really, I mean it. Have I ever told you how WIERD you are? |
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