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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Captivated~ I am your willing hostage ... your touch completely captivates me. Take me in body and soul, I beg of you ... please ... show me ~no~ mercy. I need not be rescued from your confines ... I've no plea for clemency. I am a contented prisoner, lock me up inside the depths of you ... and throw away the key. Janet Marie Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, if I must......... very sweet, i'm sure that prison guard will get a smile. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
When you find the right one, your heart will forever be a prisoner. Or at least God willing. Beautiful JM. Marina |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) J.M. This is completely breathtaking. My goodness you can write girl!! You write with the yearning of a woman in love...."I beg of you please...show me no mercy...." beautiful!!!!**AW hugs** S.S.  < !signature-->Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
very nice. i esp. liked: I am a contented prisoner, lock me up inside the depths of you ... and throw away the key. i was thinking about the word "captivated"... does it have to do with being held captive? i have actually been thinking about that word a lot, because someone told me i was "captivating" and i still can't figure out what he meant. i know the word means sort of enchanting... but does it have to do with trapping someone enchantingly, sort of? 7 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well alright Janet...if you insist...and if your good I'll let you out on Saturday nights to go to the movies. ha..ha..James |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
JM, such sweet surrender~~~~~~ what a charming hostage you would be~~~~ and a prisoner of soulful content~~~~ very nice writing BEG |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Janet Marie, Excellent writing!!! Wow....sign me up to be a prisoner of love. You make it sound so appealing. Just love the end. Sweet... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yowsers...I'm sure you'll have more than your fair share of takers on this one Nicely done |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I was deeply captivated from beginning to end. This is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
THANK YOU ALL... your SWEET replies make me smile... I love to smile. love all of you too(SMILE) take care, jm Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM---how captivating this is---I beleive you've got it quite right---like being "haunted", idn't it? Much Serene Love To You. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
JM~ This was a beautiful surrender of heart and soul touching Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Janet, I want to take you - lock you up And throw away the key. My heart will be your cellblock and Your warden will be me. You're guilty of the greatest crime - You stole my heart and soul. Now I have sentenced you to life Within me as your role. There will be no escape, my dear. The walls are much too high. The chains are much too strong to break Except by your sweet sigh. So be my prisoner for all time To sadness...bid adieu My hostage you will always be.... And I will be yours, too. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sweet Balladeer, I am SO complimented by this oh so lovely poetic reply, Your poetice words do indeed--make me blush and sigh. There is no need for chains or cells, nor a wardens key, For I am held captive by poets and their sweet poetry. A willing prisoner I am, for the gift of verse and rhyme... I'll do my sentence with pleasure,contented to do my time. Passions is my prision, no wish for escape will come from me, Poetry is my keeper, from its beauty... I hope to never be free. jm Thank you for this beautiful gift of poetry sweet Balladeer... and for saving me a dance.  Thank you also for making me smile on this morn.You made my day with this. ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love doesn't get much better than that! This is lovely, Janet Marie! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet- Your sunshine girl is back and in full force! This was absolutely beautiful!! But then again I've come to expect nothing less from you than work filled with such beautiful intense emotion! Lovely, and as always I still stand your #1 fan! Love ya much, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Hmm.. Jan a hostage.. begging for my touch... show no mercy... Wow... I can't decide if this one has a clutch on my heart or my... [ahem]... anyway... WOW. =) So short yet so SWEET! (Sorry.. leave it to me to pervert a beautiful love poem.... guess I'm a little sexually deprived lately.... or something like that ) AWESOME POEM!"Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
JanetMarie, You had me captivated from the very start! How could anyone IN THEIR RIGHT MIND ignore this? I love it, dear! Absolutely wonderful!!!!! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
(giggling at Dave) Did he just say he's sexually deprived? ROFLMAO ohmygawd...  (sigh) And you my dear, can I say "captured" instead? hehe Hey, if you're tied up and poor Dave is uh.....DAVE???!!! Where the heck are you when a woman in restraints needs you, 'eh? No wonder he's deprived - wandering off to the bars and all like that....sheesh....Right here when he COULD be of some use! LOL Love you girl, and you too Dave. Please don't hurt me, I've just had too many Mt. Dews. BTW, did I say fabulous poem? lol |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wondering if you are still captivated...James |
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