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Come on People. Give me a name for this thing.
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Come on People. Give me a name for this thing. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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backwards music < !signature-->sang in song. along went the words far and long. up on the topside. they have come and gone. away they went seldom have known. chants and speech echoing silence thrown between oceans waves and an empty home. understanding is misunderstood [This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting poem you have here.  I like it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Boovoltz New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 8 |
strange, but nice. Are you asking for a name? If you are how about "Silent Thrown" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
away they went seldom have known. chants and speech echoing silence thrown between oceans waves and an empty home. ----------- this is a very cool poem. it has some very cool lines in it. unique images. may i ask your meaning or inspiration for this? and I do like the above suggestion for a title... that was my fav line of the poem take care, jm Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Now this is a good piece of writing. I also like the above suggestion. Great line. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Well I hate to say it but there was no meaning. I sat down and started writing and this is what came out. I'm glad that you liked it. understanding is misunderstood |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Cisum I know kinda wild but why not, as the first line says music backwards. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Cisum - I like that. it's kind of cool, and mysterious. :P understanding is misunderstood |
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