Open Poetry #7 |
~evoke~ |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
YOU Evoke fire in me Igniting the flame of my heart YOU Evoke power in me Forcing electricity to spark YOU Evoke wonder in me Tempting delight to unfold YOU Evoke tenderness in me Allowing love to behold YOU Evoke my whole being to melt at the sight of you and awaken at your very touch YOU Evoke all this in me with your voice I long to hear so much Until the next time you EVOKE all this in me I U Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tracie, Sparking the electric flame with temptations for hearing a tender voice, soothing pleasure, evoking the realm of being in love.... great words! Sudhir< !signature--> Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Tracie, this poem is really nice. It's unique in wording and design. I'm surprised this has not received more responses. Back to the top it goes where it belongs. dh |
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Severn & Dark Angel New Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 4 |
hey Sparky, great poem girl, loved it! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
tracie, I love the way you designed this poem and the message is beautiful. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ Thank you i loved your reply...Special Tracie~ Danny~ Thank you my sweet freind treasured Tracie~ S&D Thanks for taking the time to read and give such an electrifying response Tracie~ LD~ So glad you liked it... thanks Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Clever Poem --Tracie -- you evoke me to await for more --) netswan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You're pretty special yourself, gal. Enjoyed the presentation. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
netswan~ Your replies are always so encouraging Thanks Tracie~ Marge Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tracie,this is excellent... perfect presentation, and very well expresssed emotions... someone has "evoked" much inspiration in you. very nice work here!!! take care, jm Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You evoked awesome feeling in the poem traci, twas a beautiful sight and Love like this is magnificent, I'm so glad that you have someone in your live that evokes a reason to share the gift that you have within you. Thank you for sharing this. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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tincan5 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 33 |
What a wonderful poem, I enjoyed it very much! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Janet Marie~ Always there with inspiring words of praise. I thank you very much and you take care now Tracie~ Butterflies~ So glad to have evoked such feelings you felt upon reading this Tracie~ Tincan~ So glad you enjoyed the read thanks Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-05-2000).] |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
that was a very nice poem....it was well done.hope to see some more. Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Tia I nearly forgot to post a reply back to you been away sorry Well here it is: so glad you read it and I thank you for your lovely reply. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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