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Severn & Dark Angel New Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 4 |
She saw spider lines of light the jewels of a city over the sea and the plane crash landed with the bang of her joy she was there in a land of strange familiarity ~ ~ ~ and it was instant recognition she had known this soul for years though only seconds had passed a lifetime of friendship has begun ~ ~ ~ she sees a spill of waves on a foreign shore trees of eucalyptus and gum birds so bright they blind the eyes but though the earth is different she is home with the sister of her soul ~ ~ ~ now new days of laughter fill the air the sea breeze captures memories and gently places them in the album of her mind only days are left before her soul sister heads back over the shore |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I am so glad I could be the first to reply! This is a wonderful melding of your friendship in poetry! I love it. I'm so glad you are having a good time!!! Send photos!  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions. I think you'll like it here. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Severn & Dark Angel New Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 4 |
Sharon - we will indeed, and we are having the BEST time. Thanks hon! K and M Jeffrey - thanks! We both have been around here for a long long time and I (Severn) just flew from NZ to meet Maree (Dark) in Australia - Passions opens new worlds.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh you two this was beautiful and me being an Aussie loved the bit about the eucalypts and gum. It was so calming and just plain beautiful Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheheeh yuh i was gonna send a special greeting o yuh sure i was good work here yuh! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I thought I recognized those names....lol Just never seen 'em together...lol Wish you 2 all the best. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Severn and Maree, I'm jumping up and down with joy! Isn't it wonderful to meet people you already know? I'm so happy for both of you. Have lots and lots of fun. And the poem? It is outstanding! Love you both Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Tracie - thanks!!!!! M and K Walty - yuh yuh yuh...thunkye Jeffrey - hey thanks! We are a couple of old timers - we just haven't been here much lately. Lizzy - and one day Lizzy I (Severn) hope to get out there and meet YOU! Thanks my friend. K and M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and it was instant recognition she had known this soul for years though only seconds had passed a lifetime of friendship has begun ------------ this is SO COOL that you guys get to meet!! very cool!! and this poem is perfect and beautiful. ENJOY!! take care jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I am so happy for you two...to actually meet...what hugs and laughter you must share...wonderful poem!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) An awesome display of friendship and how the internet can bring souls together. I'm so happy for you both and hope to one day read the poetry of two very old women who reamained together as sisters of the soul. A beautiful peice from you both that would not be the same if only one had written!!Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You two do great together! I'm glad you all got to meet finally! And you're having a great time! Add a little more fun in there for me would ya? haha HUGS |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, you two! Sounds like you are having the time of your lives! Denise |
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Severn & Dark Angel New Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 4 |
Janet Marie, thank you so very much ------------------- Martie, thank you. Yes to actually meet it's fantastic!! ------------------- Butterflies_D_C, thank you and yes I agree, this poem would not be the same if only one of us had written it. ------------------- Thanks Angel, will be glad to add more fun for you.... ------------------- Denise - thankyou! We are...we are. Maree |
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