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The Road Warrior Has Taken Control
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The Road Warrior Has Taken Control |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Road Warrior Has taken Control The road warrior has taken control leading me down darkened roads left me abandoned fighting in vain. This alley is completely forbidden it's trapped me within it's narrows taken me into it's hostile abode. A keyhole vision glimmers hope another road warrior takes control where to now I hear my mind echo as the distant silence grabs tight. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Losr Dreamer, Im not sure what your meaning was in this poem, but I got that you are now heading down another unknow road in life, I would really love to hear your thoughts, Cerenity |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Cerenity: Thanks for reading and replying. I almost have to laugh at you asking for my thoughts, God if I only knew, I'm nowhere then somewhere. I go from mountain top to the valley in zero seconds flat. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
HI Lost Dreamer, Some times I think I might say the wrong thing to someones poem, but am truly intrested in it so now I ask. Talk about being on top of a mountain then hitting sea level, im very good at this. My life is one big whiral wind of a mess and I have tried so hard to even just slow the ride down and can't as much as I think I'm going forward something puts me back two or more steps, kind of like my poetry one so happy you want to barf and the next I want to kill something. I enjoy your poetry because you have a way of telling it that makes sence but not always so blunt like I do. Thank you for writing a reply back to mine, Cerenity |
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