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Counterfeit Phantom
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Counterfeit Phantom |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC 
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Turns a blind eye to sorrowful schemes Work with your hands to polish the trust Take all you can, become what you must Your love is illusion shared with a crowd One bloodied heart beneath a white shroud One more, one less, what does it matter? One way or another the future will shatter Make your excuses, deny what is true, No one must ever hold sway over you Counterfeit Phantom how hard you will fall For life without love is no life at all © Brandyn Sand 4/99 |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Brandyn you are right about life without love is no love at all. Great ending. "Your love is illusion shared with a crowd One bloodied heart beneath a white shroud" I particulary like these two lines netswan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, Brandyn. Very well expressed! Denise |
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