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The Red of Sunset
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The Red of Sunset |
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Mitch B Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 37Orlando, FL |
The Red of Sunset Any time you feel the moment's Got to taste like April wine Pour yourself a glass of ages and the sun is sure to shine If you're busy with directions you may pass the rendezvous When the red of sunset moves you toward another day of blue |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow Mitch, this is great! Welcome to Passions netswan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 A wonderful entrance to passions! Well written I especially loved the last stanza...twas great!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Well said, Mitch! We don't want to miss anything with our tendency to make busy. Corinne |
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Mitch B Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 37Orlando, FL |
Netswan and Butterflies_dont_cry...Thank you! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
What an entrance into Passions! Great poem Mitch~ WELCOME! Marie~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This red Sunset was beautiful!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem!!! Welcome to the family.. please check your email for a special welcome!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mitch~ This is beautifully written. Welcome to Passion's. Tell us more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mitch B Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 37Orlando, FL |
Corinne, mariee66, A Romantic Heart, Poet deVine, and Marge Tindal...Thank you all for your warm welcome!!! [This message has been edited by Mitch B (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This took my breath away. It simply got a hold of me. Welcome to the forum! Kathleen |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"If you're busy with directions you may pass the rendezvous" I enjoyed your sharing of poetic discernment with this piece...quite lovely. Welcome. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful, just beautiful. I was especially touched by the last verse. I'll be watching for your work. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mitch, This was wonderful lovely vision, Welcome to passions, Cerenity |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Great simplistic job. I like the arrangement. And although I have no corny cartton to tag onto my message, I still thought that I would welcome you... |
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kimberly d New Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 4 |
and mitch i just thought i was having a mid-life crisis. To spend each day drinking in this life is my goal and you put it into words. thanks! kimberly d |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mitch~ Welcome to passions...Your fisrt post has been a wonderful one and I wait in anticipation for the next  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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