Open Poetry #7 |
The Relief Pitcher" (A repost for this time of the year) |
John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Eyes as cold as arctic ice, His lips a thin, grim line, It's only in the closer's role His talents seem to shine. Three balls, two strikes, And two men out, The winning run on third - Ah, this is what it's all about, He must strike out this bird. He checks the runner from the stretch, He kicks and he delivers - The crack of wood on ball so loud The very ball park quivers. A bird? A plane? A rifle shot? To travel with such verve? Ah, no, I greatly fear it was- Our closer's hanging curve. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
To be the "Closer", all eyes focused on the mound, game in the balance, a single pitch, to win or lose, what a rush it must be! Nice write GS~~~ |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Excellent. Enjoyed this much! "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Another masterpiece, GS. But, alas, much too short. *smile* Sand |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great poem here GS. I am a diehard baseball fan. GO BRAVES!!!! All my love, Jeffrey |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Not being a baseball fan, I still enjoyed this! It must be a thrill, unless of course, the opponant scores, then it must be the worst feeling in the world. Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Fantasico! I'm one who has to be there and watch it, rather do that, than watch on tv. Just not the same! I can feel the excitement here |
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