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your day, my day..... |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Through winters long and summers hot, endless days, forget me nots, flowers blooming, rainbows bright, dew on grass, from the night, cold morning air, frosty chill, burger king - hold the dill. Start the car, defrost the screen, No shave this morning - I look mean! traffic heavy, window down, snake my way into pollution town, lights blink, horns blair, did I forget to brush my hair? Place to work, place to live, money earnt, no one to give, hussle and hassle, gripe and moan, I just can't wait to get home! false smiles, air miles, promotions, what am I doing? PC on, connect to web, modem beeps - the go ahead, check mail, then ICQ, feed the cat, think of you, Vodka drink, splash of coke, read the jokes, make me choke! Slumber ville here I come, ready for the morning sun..... -Rich- (a typical day in my shoes) [This message has been edited by Slashed soul (edited 04-25-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Hmmm I think I may have bumped into you during the ***** and moan today....lol this was a great read of your day...I don't think there are many moments that you missed  Thanks for sharing your day!Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I like your rhythm R. |
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Mitch B Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 37Orlando, FL |
I see you saved the best for last...SLEEP!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
any old day will do.... ---now, about that shave.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I enjoyed reading about your day Slashed Soul - Roniece |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
It is in the daily details that we so often find the shadows of ourselves...this was quite cleverly shared, thank you! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Slashed Soul, What a day, I am so glad you get to visit us here though because I enjoy your poems and so forget the shave we would miss you! Cerenity |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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