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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Gleaming bright That sparkle in his eye Enticing me Drawing me inward. The darkness of his iris Flows over me Seduces me Weakens my will. Yielding to his power I collapse I am fixed Forever in his arms. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Need to call an HVAC man, sure is hot in here!!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooooooohhhhhhhhh steamy and lovely marie very nice... like an afternoon delight  well written here my dear and sweetly spicey great work!! jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
RH and JM...OHHH yeah!! Thanks! This was actually written about someone. He is HOT! Marie~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Smoking!!!  All my love, Jeffrey |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
The eyes get me all the time. Great poem. |
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Mitch B Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 37Orlando, FL |
Sounds like a wonderful place to be!!! At peace with life’s greatest mystery... |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
This is WONDERFUL, Marie - thank you so much for sharing it! Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to chase Jeffrey down - looks like he stole my cigarettes (I was wondering what happened to them, LOL!) Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I love that feeling, getting lost in his eyes. Feeling pulled into him. Nicely said! Corinne |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
"The darkness of his iris Flows over me..." Whew! I met a man like that once -- Then, I married him! Nicely done! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
oh marie, I am seduced -----wow! this is well ------haha It is very enticing --) I have come to expect great things from you - since I came here, your poems in CMGrimms challenge show much talent and creativity ------and I see it here, too. netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mariee66 it's your fellow 66er here this was very intense as in the steamy variety  tracie66 Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Jeffrey~ Thank you! Now give Troy back his cigarettes! LOL! Pen'o Passion~ The eyes are very alluring, eh??! Mitch~ Hello, and welcome again! Thanks for reading~ Troy~ Still need that light??  Corinne~ Thanks much Brandyn~ Thanks for reading and congrats!! netswan~ Thank you for all the compliments~ Your work is very good, too! tracie66~ Yes, my fellow 66'r  Thank you! Marie~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Whew!!....turn the fan on, it's steamy in here!! Great poem...really dreamy! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Yielding to his power I collapse I am fixed Forever in his arms. or until the phone or door-bell rings or the kids bang on the door wanting a drink Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think you have fallen....into a place that sounds so familiar. Enjoyed the poem! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Lizzie~ Glad you liked Rex~ Try this next time you have fallen into her arms... a) let the answering machine get the call b) don't answer the door c) lock the bedroom door, and have paper cups in the bathroom Martie~ So you know what I mean Thanks! Marie~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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