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into my thoughts
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into my thoughts |
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kimberly d New Member
since 2000-04-25
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You walk into my thoughts do you know you do this? I leave this place, this existence and rush to you like waves crashing against the rocks. I cannot stop myself or even slow my pace. I surrender to you, mind, heart and body. To your voice, your touch, your lips. I am at your mercy. The power you have over me is frightening, but I do not want this sweet torment to end. It consumes me until there is nothing left, and you leave me as you found me... wanting you, needing you, until you walk into my thoughts again. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was excellent and beautifully written. I enjoyed it and can relate to the feeling for sure.  Welcome. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
The power you have over me is frightening, but I do not want this sweet torment to end. It consumes me until there is nothing left, and you leave me as you found me... wanting you, needing you, until you walk into my thoughts again. ---------------------------------------------- Wow!! These words are powerful!! Welcome to Passions...may your stay be long and fulfilling! Love and hugs to you, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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