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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
the days I dread pass quickly enough for the days I love to drift by |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
much truth spoken here in so few perfect words... I like the sweet simplicity of this poem... yes, the harder times are softened by the times we find contentment. nice work,enjoyed this piece. jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Short but very effective. Well done! "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sweetly succinct  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done! Wish those sweet days would last a little longer, though. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Well put. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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