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Nobody (Isis Challenge)
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Nobody (Isis Challenge) |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Have you ever felt like nobody just a tiny speck of air when everyone's around you and you are just not there? When you are very lonely and no one seems to care when everyone ignores you and acts like you're not there? Have you ever felt like nobody when frieds make fun of you when people say we're friends but it really isnt true? Sometimes you feel like you're unloved and no one wants to care when everyone has a friend and you're alone somewhere! Have you ever felt like nobody just a tiny speck of dirt you're always getting stepped on and always getting hurt? I guess if you have then you know how I feel but because I am a person in time will I heal? I'm not waving, I'm drowning! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh yes my dear, I have felt that pain. I know just how you feel. And yes, time will heal. Very beautifully written. ~Sheri |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a brilliant reply to the challenge and boy can I empathise!! Great poem and thanks for sharing it!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I imagine everyone can relate to having these feelings at some point, and you've described them so well...very nicely written. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well, Come to think of it, up late I been feelin' like a canyon without an Echo and a summer sun has dried the Rhayne's. Is there a drought draught draught draught draught If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Everyone feels like this sometimes. Sometimes you feel like you're alone even if you're with someone. Great poem. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Will you heal? Yes! Are you a nobody? NO Can I relate to this and have I felt the same way? You betcha! But ya know I love ya sweetie HUGS |
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