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Enchanted....(an Acrostic?)
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Enchanted....(an Acrostic?) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Secure intent on that I seek eternal weep to meet Mahatma resounding plea for you ever even brief bless comforts me no joy chant I to hope again in refrain of love's melisma trilling tunes, tale to spin yielding Rich, a song within (enchanted...) [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Serenity, Another wonderful example of your talent. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
S weet E nchanting R omantic E nticing N obel I nviting T empting Y earning it all spells sweetness to me (smile) (almost put NOCTURNAL for the N-word) LOL beautiful imagery in this one my dear. take care me love jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Serenity -- This is enchanting. Thank you netswan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
simply sweet serenity. . . wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, but I am disappointed---couldn't get this to wrap on this damn laptop---double acrostic here...but thanks again to all. |
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