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Eviction Notice
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Eviction Notice |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Eviction Notice I scan the realms of my soul finding turbulent times, and you are at the heart of it. I gave of myself openly and with no restrictions, you were given free access to all of my domain. In the beginning you showed true love for your new abode, never stomping of the tender resources available. But a change has taken place in this realm were my heart resides and soon there shall be an eviction notice. You have forgotten that you must maintain your surroundings with care and nurture that with which was given so freely. You’ve left this realm a shambles and scorched its walls. What is left is a desolate waste land of ghostly hallows, and raptured treasures strewn about carelessly. You give careful aim to hit the corner stones that give strength and security, gouging out brick by brick each momentous gain forward that we accomplished together. When presented with the facts you maintain your ignorance and calm my sights are not properly attuned to yours, there for I am not seeing the matters at hand clearly. No showing of reversal in your attitudes, or do you seem to fear the loss of our realties thought to of been built on a solid foundation together. Termination has been presented to you and it is now in your court as to how things will end up. You better take careful thought, for I shall up hold this eviction as strongly as I up held my unwavering love and devotion for you. I shall await your reply and I hope you know that this could be a chance at renewing a very special place that can only be found in the heart. By, Cerenity |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Well, I would hope this person takes you very seriously! "You better take careful thought, for I shall up hold this eviction as strongly as I up held my unwavering love and devotion for you." Hope you get what you wish for! ~Sheri |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I hope the reply that you receive is the one for which you are hoping! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You've got a great way with words..hope you get the 'right' answer!  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Oh but I envy your straighforward boldness...you know what you want and what you don't and aren't afraid to say it...Well said!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Irie, Denise, Poet deVine, Miss butterfly, Incouragement I need this, boy do I need this. Words can be a powerful weapon if used correctly and in harmony with action, so I have the words,,,,,,,,,,now for some action ha.......... Thank you for your helpful words, Cerenity |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
i love your way of word usage, Cerenity! *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Man , What a bold statement. I hope you get the answer you want. great poem btw. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hello, GoOfYdUcK, It is nice to hear from you, and welcome to passions, I will have to look for some of your work, Thank you for your kind reply. Cerenity Hi Jeffrey, Good morning, Bold yes I guess or a mind full of anger for the moment because I promised myself I would visit my rose gardens today and that brings joy to my heart when all else fails. Thanks for sending some love my way, Cerenity |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Geez... I wish I said that...!!! Well done! |
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