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galaxy84 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Pa, USA |
I made you my world Loved you endlessly You were my everything In all my thoughts Day and night Dreams of you, me, us together I hoped to spend my life with you Then IT happened- Why I still know not You broke my heart Tore it in two I felt battered, broken, Used Useless without you You stomped my world Crushed my dreams Killed my hopes I'm so hurt I resent you I should hate you But... I can't You were my first love My last love My only love My heartbreak And for the good times The bad times I will remember you In my heart (loving you still, yet so hurt) In my mind (lessons you taught me) Always I'll never forget YOU |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
wow..Hi galaxy! im new to Passions too! i really love your poem..really touching..i can tell that this would be teh one person u wont forget in quite a while...please post more of your poems cuz i enjoyed reading dem! *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Galaxy welcome to passions....This was a good poem, I enjoyed the theme and I relate to it also! look forward to seeing more!  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
galaxy, What a heartbreaking piece. I think alot of us here at passions will be able to relate to your pain. Welcome to the family. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Welocme to Passions Galaxy.... What a heartfelt piece you have written here. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Galaxy Oh the pain in your beautiful poem. netswan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Your emotions are so clear here...please check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Welcome to passion I'm a newbie too. This is a love you'll always remember. You'll forget the bad times and just remember the love. I still love my first love. 53 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 If only we could hate them...would be much easier to get over them. You have captured the hurt and the loss so well. I hope you find the release that so many find here at Passions. Welcome!! You have made a Grand entrance! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
Hey! I'm new 2, (except I didn't write such a touching poem for my first post! Oh well,) Anywaz, good job and welcome to Passions. |
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galaxy84 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Pa, USA |
thank you all for the comments. i am gald u all like the poem. it came straight from my heart. i hope my others are good also. please read them and comment. thank u all once again. galaxy84 |
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