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How A-Peel-ing
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How A-Peel-ing |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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How A-Peel-ing ~*Marge Tindal*~  Just a little banana stripping from her skin. Wanting to show off the beauty within. A little banana stripping in the breeze Why you might even think that I'm a strip tease. There, that feels better. Naked out of my wit. Oh no ! Not that ... this banana better split ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A little banana oil might help. Very cute enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If I had seen this little poem somewhere out in the middle of nowhere, I would have said, "Marge wrote that one". It's got your name all over it! Very appealing poem, my dear Liz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....this is so sweet!!! You never cease to surprise me, Marge, and always so pleasantly!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute, Marge!! Say, a banana split does sound delicious, haven't had one of them in years!!  Denise |
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warrior Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 11 |
Mogethin Marge.....more talent revealed oh why must you strip and always tease???? love it.....when is the next show????? |
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warrior Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 11 |
Mogethin Marge.....more talent revealed oh why must you strip and always tease???? love it.....when is the next show????? |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
LOl....very cute Marge.... I'm hungry for banana split now....lol chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Clever girl, Marge. LOL netswan |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Clever and cute! How you can make something as ordinary as a banana into a witty poem just astounds me "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
really coooooooool, loved this one |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you are so cute...you do have much ap-peel--I love those chocolate covered bananas myself. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is too cute and sooo funny, Marge! Great poem!!  Marie~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hehehe, very cute, Marge! Only you could take something like a banana and write this! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, If you'll be my banana I will be your grape. I'll peel you slowly, inch by inch, Exposing your fine shape. You can squeeze the juice right out of me To show me that you're mine Then throw me down and stomp on me Just to make me wine. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Deeeeee-lightful! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I remember back in the way back when, a rumor ran rampant about the effects of smoking dried banana peels. It would appear to me you have found a far better use for bananas and their outer coverings... wonderful poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oooooh .. I like that idea ! Lizzie~ That's one heck of a compliment ! I think ! LOL ! ESP~ So very, very pleased you enjoyed. Denise~ YUM ! LOL ! After lunch today I treated myself to a banana split ... must have been the power of suggestion ! My ~Warrior~ For you ... ANYTHING ! Meet you in the glen ! No tease ... only please ! NetSwan~ The weather was so lovely this weekend that I did that 'nekkid' in the yard thing and it just came to me ! Glad you enjoyed the fun. Tess~ Really tickled that you enjoyed it. *LOVE your 'signature'. Rene~ Thanks and welcome to Passion's. Martie~ YUM ! YUM ! Now that sounds good. Mariee~ Now you're making me laugh out loud. This was a fun thing to write. LoveBug~ Sweetie, so glad it a-peeled to you ! Balladeer~ I'm game ! Your ice cream or mine ? *cute, cute, cute reply ! Beki~ So glad you likeeeeeee ! Mike~ (did it work ?) Oh, yeah, glad you enjoyed. *Thanks all for this fun ! Love ya' all ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Delicious!  You are too cute, Margie ... |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
~Marge~ You have such a gift for making the "everyday things" that we rarely think of come to life! I love this one, dear!!!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper~ Thanks. Love you ... TerryW~ You're such a sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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