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Is it an excuse?
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Is it an excuse? |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I've lost a friend, his feelings are lost inside. The moments gone, I sit alone and cry. I felt so close, I thought I reached to you. I dug deep inside, to find the heart that's true. The passion flowed, each time we kissed. The hours passed, nothing else was missed. We had it all, or so I believed? You told me then, that I had been decieved. You went out with me, to pass the time. You never expected, things would work so fine. Your love for her, has hurt you deeply. It'll pass in time, but you need to weep. You looked for things, to pass me by, but couldn't find, any reasons why. So now you say, you must let me go. You never meant, to get so close. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem... Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
tulip - OUCH! Unfortunately, I have "been there," and I feel your pain...{{{Hug}}} Does that help?  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tulip, Nice, enjoyed the read. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written, a fine poem. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Why do I identify with you so much? Good luck... ~Cuddlez~ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh the times I have walked that lonely road. Very heartfelt piece here Tulip. All my love, Jeffrey |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
ESP, Thank you, I appreciate it. Hsystems, I need all the hugs I can get right now! Seymour & Mike, I'm glad you liked it. Cuddlez, I'm sorry you identify with me, it's not fun to go through!!! Thank you!  Jeffrey, You know it's funny, it's easier to be alone than to hurt when something doesn't work out. Sigh........ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That is so sad, Tulip  HUGSDenise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh, I cry for you, Tulip. Such a lovely poem. Such a cruel end. Such are life's cruel lessons. Hearts mend, and a wiser and stronger person you will be for it. A hug from me to you. netswan |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
dsnyder & netswan, Thank you.... |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Truly a heartfelt poem. I wish I could ease your pain Tulip. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Truly a heartfelt poem. I wish I could ease your pain Tulip. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Pen of Passion, I wish you could too! Thank you! |
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