Open Poetry #7 |
~ When all the World Detests You ~ |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
When all the World Detests You ~~~ The wedded bliss has faded to the glitter of the night The beckoned call awaited til you gave in to your delight ~ Without a care you crushed the hearts of those you left behind You water-skied across our tears to chase the rainbows through your mind ~ When all the world forgets you if you're lost and all alone When all your friends have left you and your thoughts drift back to home ~ Remember there is one heart left who loves you even still A heart that's waiting by the door to bark and wag its' tail ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AMEN to that, brother!!! The one true friend that will never desert ya! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This is cute Rex! Good Ole "mans best friend"!!!! *Smiles* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And that's the truth!! Thanks again for the smiles, Rex! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Very enjoyable. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
No doubt! Mine is always faithfully waiting! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
my dog would probably be waiting just to bite me ... it likes my wife like it's her shadow ... I'm just sort of the other person who lives here |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Hear, hear!!! Amen to that!! This is a great poem, it speaks a definite truth!! Thanks for sharing this one with us!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Fantastic poem! "You water-skied across our tears to chase the rainbows through your mind" - masterful! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh .... Rex~ You've got that right. I eagerly await that little wagger when I return each time. Thank you for this delightful 'tail'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh I love it when you do this Rex~ And you do it soo well Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love this!! Don't you just love the hero's welcome when you get home. That's something I always look forward to. Someday I'd like to be the person my dog thinks I am. Cute poem! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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