Open Poetry #7 |
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~ When all the World Detests You ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London ![]() |
When all the World Detests You ~~~ The wedded bliss has faded to the glitter of the night The beckoned call awaited til you gave in to your delight ~ Without a care you crushed the hearts of those you left behind You water-skied across our tears to chase the rainbows through your mind ~ When all the world forgets you if you're lost and all alone When all your friends have left you and your thoughts drift back to home ~ Remember there is one heart left who loves you even still A heart that's waiting by the door to bark and wag its' tail ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AMEN to that, brother!!! The one true friend that will never desert ya! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This is cute Rex! Good Ole "mans best friend"!!!! *Smiles* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And that's the truth!! Thanks again for the smiles, Rex! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Very enjoyable. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
No doubt! Mine is always faithfully waiting! ![]() |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
my dog would probably be waiting just to bite me ... it likes my wife like it's her shadow ... I'm just sort of the other person who lives here ![]() |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Hear, hear!!! Amen to that!! This is a great poem, it speaks a definite truth!! Thanks for sharing this one with us!! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Fantastic poem! "You water-skied across our tears to chase the rainbows through your mind" - masterful! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh .... Rex~ You've got that right. I eagerly await that little wagger when I return each time. Thank you for this delightful 'tail'. ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh I love it when you do this Rex~ And you do it soo well ![]() Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love this!! Don't you just love the hero's welcome when you get home. That's something I always look forward to. Someday I'd like to be the person my dog thinks I am. Cute poem! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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