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Okay, So I've Lost It...
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Okay, So I've Lost It... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Do you carrot all about me, ...my sweet potato pie? I yam infatuated, ...lettuce turnip to the sky, My heart beets rutabaga, ...but grits thyme to say goodbye, I've bean hominy forever, ...for sliced onions make me cry, Don't celery my radish, ...my heart does artichoke, Corn is my salvation, ...Nathan Kale with honor spoke, Okra is my favorite show, ...has mushroomed into cabbage, Asparagus the cauliflowers, ...broccoli doesn't show its sage, Peas forgive horrendous rhyme, ...I've squashed my feeble mind, I drift into tomato paste, ...Brussel sprouts I cannot find. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL Mike, this is a fantasappley and clever fun read. Turnip some more of this squashy stuff. Thanks, I needed a laugh. netswan |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
ROFL!!!! Err...yeah...I'd say you're way gone, Mike! Loved it! Marie~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay, Okay, you and Way Out Walt got together and partied without me! LOL Big-eatin'-grin! |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
LOL! A veggie lover's dream poem!! I loved it!  Bobbycat =^..^= ~~ And it harm none, do what ye will.~~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LOL--hoe, hoe, hoe---you've raked the vegetable kingdom over the cold frame. Trowel as I might this delight---er....I dig it!!! Lettuce leaf! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You do aim to peas! Loved this! Corinne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Perusing this in the light of day, I concur with myself on the title. Thank you all for the corny reponses to my corny poem. At least I had the decency to leaf Pepper out of this. As one of my all time heros so elegantly states, "Suffering Succotash!" This is hard to spinach, it ought to be eggplanted six feet under." [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Not only did this make me smile, it made me hungry!!!  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
LOL, Not much here for a meat lover though ;( Thanks for an early morning laugh, mike. Michael |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"...broccoli doesn't show its sage," ah, Mike, what a chard you are, my friend. |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
LOL I think I'm hungry now. Thanks for the laugh "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69 |
To those of you who developed a hunger reading this poem.... may a vegematic find your bed as you sleep tonight. As a representative of the ASPCV... (American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Vegetables) I am shocked. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  Oh, Mike, this is hillarious!Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehehehe Man, you are so talented! LOL Wow, where the heck do you come up with this stuff? You must just sit around the house all day, dreaming up corny sayings! hehehe This is perfectly edible, sir!  |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Tastefull!! Is there any seconds. insect |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds as if you had a corniption fit...but a food fest, none the less...good job! |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Absolutely delicious! But orange you going to do another, my passion's fruit and it would drive me bananas! "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A passion fruit poem? sheeesh.. have to think on that one... A kiwi little ode... About my cherry pie, We cantelope, So honeydew not cry. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
OK...very clever!!!! I'm lost for words...so here's a round of applause instead ****clap...clap..clap**** "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so cute  |
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