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Sweet Dream of Serenity
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Sweet Dream of Serenity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I had the best the sweetest dream woke me gentle with touch beguile A warmth that made me hug myself to start the day adorned in smile. Though face a blur, there you were, brushed back my hair to see my eyes, and lips I thought but born for kiss whispered instead, "just smile." "Everything is as it should. I am away but for awhile. This road you're on, you walk alone; but you've just another mile. I am here. So do not fear, to walk the path on to Wit's End. Keep you hope of love revoked-- to end is but begin again." |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Serenity, Mere words could not describe how much I needed to read this tonight. You have written an exquisite piece here. Thank you for sharing it. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a beautiful poem. The message at the end was my favorite part. "Keep you hope of love revoked-- to end is but begin again." I enjoyed this very much. "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Sigh* That's all I can say here serenity. . . I can see that you've been inspired again. . . Simply wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh my...im gonna have to send that muse of yours flowers(smile) I LOVE this girl... how very lovely and peaceful, perfect my sweet...just perfect. "whipering more smiles"to ya... jm  Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Serenity! Very nice! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
nicely done ... they say the last mile holds the most ( best? ) memories  Rex}>{{{{o> [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very good. sad but good Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
We seem to share the same outlooks of late, serenity. This was beautiful. Love the ending - allows one to look for hope - from despair. Michael |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
And this face will return again and again, if you let it in. Loved how you captured the muse. Corinne |
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