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Wishing You Were Here
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Wishing You Were Here |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho 
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Shadows, < !signature-->always shadows, howling round my ear. Sorrows, always sorrows, my heart doesn’t want to hear. Sadness, always sadness, comes a solitary tear. ~ ~ ~ Wish you were here. Wish you were here. ~ ~ ~ Ancient, I’m so ancient, half a century of grief. Timeworn, ever timeworn, difficult to find relief. ~ ~ ~ Wish you were here. Wish you were here. ~ ~ ~ Loves, so many gone; echoing trails of my lost. Lost, stretching haunted years, no way to count the cost. ~ ~ ~ Wish you were here. Wish you were here. ~ ~ ~ (For Kelly) The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-21-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Rosemary~ My heart hugs you. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
So very glad I never need to wish you were here. Thank you my dearest and too, your ever caring. Could I tell you I love you while your here..? Sure why not. Mush Mush Love, Dale |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Rosemary......... This is wonderfuly written. Saddnes, sorrow, haunting.....my heart reaches for you my dear! {hugs} ~Sheri |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your words, "I am ancient" just wrenched my heart--with the strength of your shouting heart you have written. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
You can feel your emotions calling out from your powerful words. As was said above, a sorrowful haunting quality. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
lovely. Corinne |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I could feel the emotions of this pouring out with every word and stanza....very powerful and incredibly sad. Take care. AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
Oh, this is so sad it makes me cry. I miss someone like that. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"No way to count the cost", except by the depth of love, which is infinite. So beautiful your verse of love Liz |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
here I am typing through the night my sweet Rosemary's covers are pulled up tight then I saw her name and couldn't help myself. Thank you RJ. Thank you all from a very caring heart.< !signature--> If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so sad |
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