Open Poetry #7 |
A Glimpse Of Tomorrow (Response To Earth Day Challenge) |
Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
A Glimpse Of Tomorrow I closed my eyes And I foresaw tomorrow All that man has dreamed and hoped Came to a vision of sorrow I tried to see my home But my home I couldn't see Cause it had been burned For all the sin that was in me I was afflicted I didn't knew what to do I tried to look inside my heart And see if this was really true But it was just a dream Finally sense came back to me I saw myself in another world In a way I didn't want to be The clock is ticking And to change is the only way to save We must give up our pride! We must be strong , We must be brave! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
||
© Copyright 2000 Pietro - All Rights Reserved | |||
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LR, nice writing. Good response to the challenge. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
||
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lone Ranger, Wonderful post, another dareing soul to leave his mark for Earth Day. Challenge well met. Parker |
||
netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
A thought provoking way to look at earth day --) Challenge well met. I loved the end --- ....The clock is ticking And to change is the only way to save... netswan |
||
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect..words of truth and wisdom in this... thanks for joining the cause and helping spread the word! take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
||
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Brought back for Earth Day. Michael |
||
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HAPPY EARTH DAY LN BTTT! Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |