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Flowers for you(A Love Senyru)
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Flowers for you(A Love Senyru) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Flirting with your hair~ Face lit up like yellow sun~ Friendly gesture pleases |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I found this delightful...let's share it around a bit, shall we?  ~ Claire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
very pretty... |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
In a word - beautiful!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a sweet love senyru! You have summed up flirting and love in three lines perfectly Do share more with us!Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
delightful reply,Meadowmuse very pretty remark,Sunshine  in a word,hsystems:Thanx!  yes,Melissa,i will strive to write more haiku and share them with you have anyone noticed that every line of my senyru begins with the letter "F"?here' my ambition:To write 26 haiku/senyru,one for each letter of the alphabet do wish me luck.... ") |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
"Flirting with your hair" Now does that mean you are touching her hair, or she is touching her hair?? I thought it's her flicking her hair, and giving a BRIGHT smile, to attract someone's attention. Am I right?? And yes, good luck!! 26 senryus?! That's a challenge! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow, I have to look up what a senyru is now. Enjoyed, fr.She said burn ... together. |
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