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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2000-05-15 12:38 PM

Demons awake in Hell .

The perfect picture,
Hanging on the wall,
A face so perfect,
From there it calls,
But out of reach,
The dreaming lies,
Deep down inside something cries,
Stirred up,
Upset,
The demon crawls,
Awakened in it’s bloody hall .
Death befalls,
Within his wrath,
His evil choking,
Smiting laugh .

Written by Tom Baker .

Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

1 posted 2000-05-15 02:23 PM

Tom~
Very dark and powerful piece. I feel the strength coming from the poem. Very perceptive writing, my friend!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2000-05-18 04:03 AM

Thanks very much Terry, I am glad that you enjoyed it, I find it very difficult to write about anything that isn't dark or negative at the moment .
L.of.L. Tom .

Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

3 posted 2000-05-18 05:29 AM

Wow Tom, this is deep and dark.
All the light and sweet comments you
give to the writers in here - one would
not see this side of you.

netswan

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-05-18 07:09 PM

~Cool read for sure. Like a mask of sorts hiding this demon you speak of....it's in the best of us somewhere.......take care.

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

5 posted 2000-05-19 01:32 AM

Wow Angelswing~
I'm quite honored to have such a similar name to someone with such talent as you. The image you paint of the pain you feel right now through the words of the demon in hell, illustrate all of the emotions. Wonderful poem and poems that portray dark images are often the most therapeutic.

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angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

6 posted 2000-06-29 04:18 AM

Thanks alll, this is probably my most powerful piece and yet i was in a relatively good mood when I wrote it, I sometimes think That I enjoy being depressed, then I think how bad it is and change my mind, Thanks for the way you see me other side as some people never see this side of me .
L.of.L. Tom .

Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

7 posted 2000-07-12 12:01 PM

Dear Angelwings, What made you chose your name as I can't help but feel we must be on a similar wavelength, I am going to endevour to read some of your poetry, but my computer always seems to crash as soon as I start doing a long search .
L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

8 posted 2002-07-08 12:20 PM

Extremely Powerful!! Bravo! You have expressed your emotions so well!! Don't mind me, I am purusing your writings and this one really caught my eye. I can relate to the dark side better than 'blue skies and butterfly' pieces.

This is masterfully written and certainly captured your strong and intense emotions.

Write on!

Bethann

What is past is prologue;
what to come,
In yours and my discharge.

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