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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 2000-06-09 09:08 PM


No words to say
but they roam
inside my head
finding space
arguing

I spend my time
keeping busy
less time
for
negative thoughts

but they roam
the moment
there is silence
in my head

How busy can you be?
I try
I lay down
when my eyes hurt
when I know the duvet
will fill my head
with its warmth

silence inside and out
healing
repairing
giving me back
so that I may give again....

Yep...I'm mending myself!





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1 posted 2000-06-09 09:15 PM


This is very com-mend-able, Rainbow. I know exactly what you mean. It's good to keep as busy as possible to keep the bad out but at some point in time the guard goes down and those little suckers are lying there in wait. I think you are doing brilliantly, even just by writing this poem. May the mending continue, sweetheart. My thoughts continue to be with you  
First__Knight
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2 posted 2000-06-09 09:38 PM


So nice to see you again RainbowGirl and my prayers go to you in this time of mending...

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.


Munda
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3 posted 2000-06-10 04:31 AM


Good to see you Cindy and I'm glad to see you're healing. My thought are with you girl. (((((HUGS)))))
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4 posted 2000-06-10 07:55 AM


RainbowGirl~
It's just plain downright GOOD TO SEE YOUR SMILING FACE.
Take the time to mend - and know that we fill our hearts with the blessings of your mending.
Love you~
~*Marge*~


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Corazon
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5 posted 2000-06-12 10:22 AM


ahhhhhhh, a duvet sounds good right about now...its just too early and my head hurts...and I know just what you mean, great poem  
JP
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Loomis, CA
6 posted 2000-06-12 11:29 AM


Ditto the the good thoughts expressed here..

 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway


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