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Maxine New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 6Forestville, Maryland |
Untitled I pick up the pices of a shattered heart I lay there and cry And now I sit here lonely And wonder why How your feeling just up and faded away To why I'm still thinking about you everyday Teardrop One After the other Fall from my eyes Broken wings I can no longer fly. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very tender thoughts you shared here. If there's one thing I wish I had the talent to do, it would be to be able to read another's mind AND heart. Would make finding that special someone so much easier. It's so hard to sit and wonder, and try to guess....chin up! Welcome to Passions!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maxine~ A lovely thoughtful poem. If you're looking for a title may I suggest 'When Teardrops Fall'? Welcome to the world of caring hearts and talented poets here in Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
A very soft look into a fragile place. Thanks for showing another new member that it can be done. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Gentle and sad thoughts...I wrote one sortof on the same subject recently and titled it "Shattered". Reminded me of the song "As Tears go by". Hope you are O.K. James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"broken wings i can no longer fly" Maxime, this poem is quite heartfelt and to this verse I invision another end .. ~ Strength in my soul and passion in my heart My wings will heal and the aches shall part ~  Coco |
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